Try and add more details to make it more scary and tense, because the battle with the husks was going to be intense, but then all of a sudden. Neither did the battle with the Illagers. There was a lot going on, but the battle against the husks didn't last very long. Pick a side! (You can also just make some parts funny, and others serious, as a lot of other authors do.)Īction: 8/10. (Yay for Honey!) It wasn't super serious, and it wasn't super funny. There's no laughter! It was kind of a neutral book. When writing book two, spend a little more time on it.Ĭomedy: 4/10. This book was really good! But even though the plot was good the book was very short, so please work on that. Pick a side! (You can also just make some parts funny, and others serious, as a lot Wow!

When writing book two, spend a little more time on it. Anyway, Onto the first section! -ratings- Length: 8/10. Wow! This book was really good! But even though the plot was good the book was very short, so please work on that.

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